
ok, so this poem is something I want to post. I wrote this and wanted to get feed back.
Mr. Inloes, you don't have to count this if you don't want to. Thanks everyone.
Stuck in a world you thought you once knew
Now everyone's turning their backs on you
Once quiet girls, changed and its strange
Have turned their backs and started doing drugs
The chick next door that you liked for years
Has turned her back and started drinking beers
All of these changes are going around
And you kick and scream but they don't hear a sound
What happened to the innocence so easy to find?
You wonder if you're the only one who still has their mind
They try to pull you in and you know you might fall
But nobody knows there's a solution to it all
Right over this wall you can have your life back
Of friends, and laughter, be back with your pack
There's no need to worry, no need to fear
All of the innocence you know is still here
There are just a few obstacles you know you must climb
Persuading and begging to get back your mind
You cannot give up the prize is far too great
Just hope your obstacles don't make you too late
Do all you can to help your chains break
This is all real, nothing is fake
You're stuck in a world you thought you once knew
Turn your back on your world and they've turned theirs on you
Stuck in a world you thought you once knew
Now everyone's turning their backs on you
Once quiet girls, changed and its strange
Have turned their backs and started doing drugs
The chick next door that you liked for years
Has turned her back and started drinking beers
All of these changes are going around
And you kick and scream but they don't hear a sound
What happened to the innocence so easy to find?
You wonder if you're the only one who still has their mind
They try to pull you in and you know you might fall
But nobody knows there's a solution to it all
Right over this wall you can have your life back
Of friends, and laughter, be back with your pack
There's no need to worry, no need to fear
All of the innocence you know is still here
There are just a few obstacles you know you must climb
Persuading and begging to get back your mind
You cannot give up the prize is far too great
Just hope your obstacles don't make you too late
Do all you can to help your chains break
This is all real, nothing is fake
You're stuck in a world you thought you once knew
Turn your back on your world and they've turned theirs on you
